Commenting on Docs
Today we learnt how to comment on titles / sentences just by highlighting the sentence / title we want to comment on then press the the comment icon , We also learnt about different words and how to describe them !
T-shirt Design !
Today ( August 22 2023 ) My class and I have participated in creating tshirts online and making duplicates / creating your own , it was a very fun experince that we did with Matua Aina and I really would reccomend doing this with your class ! , it if very fun and you can get alot of ideas from online and be creative in what t-shirt your interested in creating!
War
Is War Necessary ?
War is unnecessary because it puts others people lives at risk , little children and families should not be harmed because of the arguments that they did not start or was involved in,the arguments between the mayors or prime ministers should be sorted and and talked about like real mature adults, war costs other people’s hard work and it destroys families houses which they actually put really hard work into buying/building, war also kills the environment and may cause animals to extinct it can also cause pollution and disagreements between other people.
The people and the community should have a say in the war threat and the government should hear what their opinion is and how much the community or the people have to pay for the damages that they did not cause or predict, it is important for the government to hear what the people say because it is mostly them that are gonna pay for the consequences of what the government did or started that caused war to happen.
How do you feel about this?
I feel that other people that survived the world wars should share their experience on what happened during the war and how much damage it made and how it felt for them to lose their loved ones and how it was traumatizing having to watch other people die in pain while they did not have a choice but to watch for their safety.
I also feel that the people and the community should have a say in the war threat and the government should hear what their opinion is and how much the community or the people have to pay for the damages that they did not cause or predict, it is important for the government to hear what the people say because it is mostly them that are gonna pay for the consequences of what the government did or started that caused war to happen.
Whats your opinion on the War?
Would you do anything to change it?
Reading Response
O se pŌ Māninoa
White hat:
What information do I have?
This book was written by an polynesian person names Johnny Frisbie
It was also illustrated by Judith Kunzle.. The story was based on a little girl that shows she had crawled out of her tent where she had lived with her two brothers and her parents.
What are the facts?
The story occurred at night, she lived on a tropical island along with her two brothers and her dad, she described the night as mesmerizing and she described that the shadows of the coconut trees were slowly waving back and forth in the reflection of the sea.
What information do I need?
The information that I need is what is the girl’s name? Why was she living on a tropical island? Is she not afraid of the dark? Why couldn’t she sleep? Where was her mother?
What do I want to know ?
How could they survive on a tropical island? How many in her family? How could she have described the night? .
What is wrong with this book?
What’s wrong with this book is that there are parts of the story that needed more information like what’s the girl’s name? What was her motive to go outside? Why couldn’t she sleep? See these are some of the parts of the book with needed information